文秀网一、TOEFL TPO25 综合作文求修改 200分满分谢谢
以下仅就语法问题修正如下：
The arguments of both the writer and the lecturer are focusedon the use of clay vessels for electricity production. The writer presents his assumptionsagainst its existence in three aspects including the [blackness?] ofmetal wires and conductors, the findings in a similar city and the limited knowledgeabout electricity at that time. However, the lecturer strongly opposes all ofhis assumptions.
The writer starts with his first assumption that thesevessels cannot be used for power generation because there is no evidence showingthe existence of conductors and metal wires. The lecturer, however, objects himby pointing out that those vessels were dug out by local people and just threwthem away because they thought them of no use. Therefore, it is unconvincing asnobody knows the truth.
Then the writer mentions an exploratory report about theuse of another city nearby the city in discussion and further mentions that scientistsfound no evidence showing copper cylinders were used for assembly like holdingsacred. But the lecturer opposes to it, saying it does not prove anything [becauseone thing can do a similar thing and can surely adapt any other one这句不知所云].
Finally, the writer thinks that ancient people do notneed electricity because they do not have any electrical appliance. But thelecturer thinks electricity is very useful for ancient people especially fordoctors as they may need it to heal pains from muscles and bones, and it isalso beneficial to those who want to show magic power to others in order to provetheir power. It is therefore pretty useful.
In summary, the lecturer and the writer are contradictorywith each other on this topic.
二、求,托福TPO全24套真题,包括听力音频的原文
托福TPO1-24+听力文本+综合写作阅读听力+答案。。。请查收。
我发的tpo有2个版本。。。一个是pps版。。一个是软件版。。
pps使用方式和正式考试有点小区别。。算分有点烦。。但是使用方便，跳题比较方便，而且答案基本正确。。
这个软件版免安装，界面非常真实。。几乎和正式考试一模一样。
有练习和测试模式。。可以自动算分。。而且阅读有答案详解。。听力有文本。。口语还可以自动录音。
但是有个有个缺点。。。答案有些有问题。。。所以又发了一份答案给你。。如果不会用。。压缩包里有使用说明。
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